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Empty Road

Hands break through thick air
Like broken glass
Feet pummel the ground
Towards the overpass

Plumes of warm breath
Cloudy in the air
Music pumps through body
Almost half way there

Sweat drips down
Blinked out of the eyes
Heart pumps, muscles ache
An ache the owner denies





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  • NyteShade
    February 2, 2008
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    a very deep piece. I like the way it rhymes near the end. Great job.