My heart still waits for that special someone,
the who will sit and watch your favorite reruns.
A person who is not afraid to tell you when your wrong or out of line,
Someone who will be there when your heart is broken for the hundrenth time.
A joyful soul that lightens your day,
A loyal person who would never go behind your back in any way.
Author notes
1. The lonliest woman in the world is a woman without a close woman friend.
A contest entry
- Friendship Between Women by SeptemberFaith.
650 points, ended March 4, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I could feel how much you ached for a close friend to be there in the fun times and the sad times. I hope you find this person; someone you can run to with a promotion, a new love, or a funny story. A soulmate is wonderful, but a true girlfriend is a necessity. Good luck in this contest. Peace, Liz
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In the second line, "your" should be first person. This isnt really what I was looking for. I want to know about the friendship between women.. not the lack there of.
Good Luck Poet.
Criss -
A good poem
Dear poet, what a good poem. It is so simple and up to the point. I think u made a mistake on the third line. 'if' i think is supposed to be of. Keep writing.
Good day
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