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Guitar Serenade

Your the only one for me,
Why don't you realize that?
Why don't you believe?
Your the only one that understands,
The complexity of me.

I write you this song,
From the depths of this ice shard,
That I once called my heart.
This guitar is your rose,
And this song a serenade.
My fingers are bleeding,
From playing over and over,
But without you my heart is bleeding.

Don't turn off your light,
Or shut the blinds.
I know you still love me,
I can hear your heartbeat.
Being in this world is more torture,
Without you by my side.

Please don't go,
Your the only one for me.
Don't commit murder on my heart.

Author notes

Sorath- Niki FM

Instead of the whole holding a radio thing up to her window this guy is playing her a song on guitar outside her window.

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  • CatastrophicSmile
    February 4, 2008
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    wow this is an awsome write i love it. thank you for entering =] ♥ i love the last line i can really relate, it wrapped up the entire poem.


  • Swintha
    February 3, 2008

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    Yay Sorath. What a pretty song. Your guitar draws me to you and your eyes are just stunning beauty we are so cheesy but thats ok. I love your poetry and you should feel good about that! because i am one to love few things

    -Swintha