You never knew
how much I truly loved you
or that you would never see
the grandchild given by me
I should have told you but I was scared
I though if you knew you'd no longer care
that you would be mad at me
for you wanted me to do more you see
I didn't want to let you down
and see upon your wonderful face a frown
I know I should have told you
then I'd know that you knew
and now that you are gone
the nightmares plague me in the predawn
A contest entry
- I Should Have Told You.... by UnManned4Ever.
1000 points, ended February 13, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For The Deceased by DeadlyTurnip.
1550 points, ended March 24, 2008, 32 entries
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could not have been said better
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i appreciated this it was very close to the heart
hope you have happy times to help
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I like it
it's full of truth
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I liked it alot!! Your good at rhming, it wasn't forced!!
rock on!
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Things said reach the people we love in some magic way out of our sight. Nice thoughts. Peace always fills in when grief finishes.
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this is really good and i like this. Great write and good luck in the contest.
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