I want to write something cheap && tawdry.
Something to make you feel like you could fall for me in an instant.
Fall as if all the adrenaline in your stomach has finally caught up.
Giving me something to cling to.
Something.
Anything.
A look.
A smile.
A touch.
Give me something to hold on to.
Hold my face in your hands.
Say nothing.
Say anything.
Give me that look that says “I could love you if I let myself, but I don’t want to fall in love again”.
Hold my hips as if we were sinking into sea, and they were your floatation device.
Put your hands on the small of my back.
Make my heart skip a few beats.
Make me believe that it’s just us.
You && Me.
Please tell me what you think
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Lie to me baby!
You hit your target every time you shot from the hip.
This seems like a piece that just spilled right out.
...Hold my hips as if we were sinking in the sea..
...Give me something to hold on to...
The abyss of life with no passion seems almost unbearable,
even the illusion will do.
Just "kimmme somethin"!
...Hold my face in your hands...
This touched me,such a human yearning, a primal request from the soul.
Make me think it's possible.
There is so much of you here,
as I read it again,
so much.
A masterpiece.
BLESSINGS GYPSY,
LOWELL POE
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Wow i really like this piece a lot. Its very hopeful..
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