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It's Always Been You

When I close my eyes,
I still see your smile.
And when I talk to you, to hear you laugh,
I'll go the extra mile.

5 years and I'm just as hopeless...
Hopelessly in love with you.
My first serious girlfriend, my first true love,
And I know you feel the inferno too.

The blaze of our love,
It's passionate flame,
We've been apart two years.
How can I still feel the same?

Yet you still make me a better person,
Whenever you're around,
And the looks between us, still convey so much...
Without a single sound.

One touch, and that spot is burning,
A compliment, and I stutter.,
A hug, and my knees are shaking,
One kiss, and my hearts a-flutter.

5 years I've known you,
We've been apart two.
But somehow, deep down, I know..
It's always been you.

Every night you're in my dreams,
You're there every time I close my eyes...
With you, it was stronger, much more real.
Compared to that...every other relationship was lies.

You're my soul mate, its that simple.
Keeper of my spirit, my mind, my heart...
And looking back, I realize...
It'll always be you...together or apart.

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Written for my ex, who I am still madly in love with.

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  • hopelessly-broken
    February 6, 2008

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    ohhh wow hun this is amazing!!!!

    you showed such emotion, and passion towards her. what a great write!

    keep up the amazing writting
    love always HB

    p.s. does she no how you feel??


  • Ali - Pie
    February 4, 2008
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    Beautiful

    Love the title, fits perfectly with the poem. Very deep and heart felt!!
    Awesome job!