You honor me
With your eyes that speaks of comfort
Satisfaction
Laying in your bare necessities
I smile
With my own thoughts of fantasies
lips trailing in the bosom of your wanton desires
Fingers, tracing the contours of your beauty
Kisses to your cheeks, while continuing down your thighs
O how your eyes do hypnotize me
A trance that overwhelms my mind
Through the night into the morn
Where I awaken to see your thoughts
Float towards me in revelry
Of orgasmic contentment
Yes, it is you
That lounge in pleasure
As we share, in secrecy
Revealing naught of the delight
That swells within us
Your pleasurable form travels well
You captivate me
To reminisce to the moments within you
Holding tightly as ecstasy takes your consciousness
To rapture within your core
So speak to me my love
Remember me
Through your eyes of contentment
Author notes
when you wake up and see some one staring into your eyes and you almost know exactly the way they feel.
Or a photo of someone that is shared with you. Only you. and you read their thoughts threw their eyes. This is what I felt
In a list
A contest entry
- LOVE LETTERS 4 U by Ephiphany.
900 points, ended February 3, 2008, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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DAMN! I see why this walked away with the gold, this was very much worthy of it. I really like these lines
"With my own thoughts of fantasies
lips trailing in the bosom of your wanton desires
Fingers, tracing the contours of your beauty
Kisses to your cheeks, while continuing down your thighs
O how your eyes do hypnotize me"
This was good writing. Sorry I haven't been reading in awhile I been trying to get my thoughts together. But I will be checking back more often.
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Thanks B - no one caught the cheek thing. Its not the ones on your face.
Good to see ya bro. I need to get back on line as well. Brother been working a little too much.
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Wow your work is truley amazing and awsome I think you may know my anuty onesugur. she showed me one of your writes onces so I had to comment. I too love to write about romance it makes me feel nice and humble deep down inside
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Thanks so much. Yes I do know Onesugar ( I call her sweetness
) she motivates me to be creative. Thanks for the read. I'll return the favor 
Mykeee
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Oh wow! This piece is just beautiful, and it really deserved winning the gold trophy. It's always great to wake up to someone, and just feel like anything you could ever need is right there. I love it!
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Thank U - it was inspired by a piccture of someone and they were so pleased. And she looked like she was staring at me for hours with joy in her eyes
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Ahh! the words here speak of a man that knows and loves. One that can see into the soul of woman. knowing what she needs........excellent write son...
Mom
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thanks mom
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Awww this is beyond beautiful
Yes my friend, this really does have
GOLD written all over it.
Very lovely piece of poetry, I truly enjoyed.
loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Beautiful
This is a very beautiful poem, I see why you won gold, this most have been a precious moment that you shared, Excellent write, thank you for sharing and keep them coming.
raingoddess
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As precious as you always are. Glad U enjoyed it
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This is really good. It seems to me to be more of a series of statements about the person rather than a flowing poem but that only makes the poem more enjoyable.
You have some excellent imagery and your choice of words is excellent.
The feelings ooze out.
A great poem, worthy of more than 3 applauds.
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Thanks Elf.
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Sigh....
this is absolutely wonderful thoughts and vivid feelings. This is something many people share, but afraid to say, I must admit that I thoroughly enjoyed this the most and I do thank you for entering and good luck in my contest.
Ephiphany♥
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Thank U - its a touch of what is it that you don't know. tapped into my sensual brain that night
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