tall spindly spruce tree
covered in inch thick hoar frost
white icing coats cake
Author notes
"This is a great form of poetry
that flows from my thoughts,
though the picture I see is greater,
I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."
A contest entry
- Haiku by InBetweenThoughts; all welcome by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended February 21, 2008, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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The aroma of spruce, the images so clear. Good form and counts. Thank you for your entry, Ken IBT
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Wonderful
Great haiku. So vivid and well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Oh, dear one, I can see the tree so vividly. What a treasure in this little gem - lovely, lovely work!
Wolfie
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your authors notes pretty much sum up what i was gonna say... summed up beautifully in short verse. i love this piece. i wish you the best of luck in the contest...
hugs,
georgie,
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Sonds like the spruce is in a winter wonderland with big snows. good luck in the contest.
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