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Crawling to the Other Page

lets jump start the day babe;
i wanna see the world.
stretch out your arms
and be like a star
reaching for the Earth.

jump on the bright side babe;
its the elevator home.
close your eyes sweetie;
make believe I'm you're bright side
shining through.

lets crawl to the other page babe;
set sail to a moon.
we can see the blue shine
right at our feet;
just listen to the holes cry.
 
i want to see your flaws;
please show me your art.
i want to radiate colours
that don't exist;
to be the white light.

you loosened your grip babe;
my hand feels misplaced.
don't you want to hold my hand dear?
i'll just put it back in place.

spread out our fingers babe;
i'll watch you count the time.
lets wait for you to break
every heartstring that's mine;
come on, over drive my heart.

i still love you babe;
i felt that you were mine.
i wanna see the world still;
all the colours in the sky.
i'll set sail to the moon soon;
to be with the holes that cry.


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Haven't written for a while...gah. Spontanous lines!

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  • LadyAmalthea
    February 2, 2008

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    Awww, I like this. Even though its really sad and aching it has this inspiration and power to it. It reminds me of a line in a Dido song:
    "Lets breath stardust into our lungs, lets drive too fast, lets go too far, when our hearts bleed we'll know are alive."
    It just has this ache that is breaking free and dreaming and spinning out of control. And thats why I like it because it turns pain and lonely thoughts into a beautiful heartbeat in over drive.
    I really liked the rhyming, it was so natural and just made it feel like a song. You should make this a song it would be amazing.
    I loved how personal it was, and how much like adventure was in it. It was like holding hands into a rainbow wormhole. Absolutely gorgeous.

    xoxo<3