The alley I walk does seem terribly long
the inevitable consequence dire
too great and too small feels the bit I'm allowed
before the sad flesh starts to tire
Author notes
Time. It goes on, much like life. No stopping it. Some days that sucks.
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the alley = dark dreary sad long What inevitable consequences dire?? living life does have its consequences and once you make a mistake you can not go back and fix it you have to try and make things right and live with the mistakes To great and too small fees the bit I'm allowed wow great line to great and to small did you mean that as in life you can do great things yet ur life its self feels so small?? what do you mean by that line...i love it before the sad flesh starts to tire wow great great work
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the way it was going through me when I wrote it, the inevitable consequence is death. noone gets out of here alive and all that. also, by too great and too small was about how at different times in life, it can seem too short or during bad times, too long
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Awesome! And yeah, we need to invent a time stopper...k! But this was an amazing poem, and I love the railroad track background...it goes with the poem very well! Keep writing...
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