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I Dream Of Her?!

A day I'll never forget,
though in a way
I wish I could

I saw her,
in all her glory
standing before me
and my blind eyes

I tried looking away
but I couldn't..
I wouldn't...

She just stood there..

A dream
if only!
no.. it was real

I witnessed her bountiful curves
so beautiful..
so dangerous

Then I made her smile
the way I've always loved
that beautiful smile
that now haunts my sweetest dreams

The dreams
I now dream of her

Author notes

Sorry about marking this poem as an adult write, but I don't want ppl off of AP 2 read this. I'm so confused! She has become my best friend, one I treasure!! And not 2 mention shes dating someone I consider like a brother, and I don't want 2 hurt him.!! Jeez, talk about DRAMA!

02/01/08 10:53 pm

Say What You Want, If it's hurtful u'll be ignored

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  • Ulimate
    April 22, 2008
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    *clap*

    I like the flow of this one... very nice.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    February 2, 2008

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    i agree with the person before me, and i do hope you figure out what to do and everything works out, keep it flowing


  • hypnorocker
    February 2, 2008

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    wow... plot thick enough to be right out of a soap opera!
    hope that resolves itself in a beneficial way...

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