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Sweet Amour

When i look into her eyes i can feel my heart melt
I'm taken to a place that's unknown
Overwhelmed with feelings i have never felt
feels like we're in the world alone.

When i hear her sweet voice i get lost in her words
and i am no longer able to think
i feel I'm flying and on top of the world
and when i stare at her i cant seem to blink


My love for her only gets stronger with each passing minute
and each day i want her more then the stars above
i long for her touch and her hand with mine in it
and for her to know shes my one true love







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  • Nimphadora
    February 2, 2008
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    Wow

    Wow i love your poem......You got talent girly.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    February 2, 2008

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    i long for her touch and her hand with mine in it
    and for her to know shes my one true love

    Ah..this is the sweetness of the love and the melody of the song of the love..a beautiful poem is here..well done...