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Freedom for Mojo

 


"Expose yourself to your deepest fear; after that, fear has no power,
and the fear of freedom shrinks and vanishes. You are free."
                     --Jim Morrison

 

 

 

Within dreadful deep reverence     
Unholy sacrilege in remembrance,
Most frightful fits depicting demise
A venerated horrific image belies
The conscience demands deliverance;

Visions of Hell with beast be layed                
Viscious attacks of cerebral dismay
Conquering the demon most feared
Fear of freedom simply disappeared,               
Triumphant release from being enslaved.

 

 

 

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"Expose yourself to your deepest fear; after that, fear has no power,
and the fear of freedom shrinks and vanishes. You are free."
                     --Jim Morrison

 

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  • Walk-Free
    May 30, 2008
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    short, but really powerful...x

    beautiful words; great poem


  • Blooming Poet
    March 18, 2008
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    wow. I don't know what to say, this is amazing. Great emotions displayed here.

  • PerfectImperfection
    February 9, 2008

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    All I can say is if I could get a hold of that edit button that took THIS away from my contest....

    Damn. Well nevertheless - you chose one of my favorite quotes, and managed to pen something quite powerful. This almost seems like a condensed version of the actual feeling, though I may be incorrect.
    A dark region found within the depths of imagery woven.

    I can honestly say, I wish the other entries had been this good....



  • wakingdevil
    February 3, 2008

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    The verbiage u used here was good, but the rhyming was a bit far fetched at places, it cd hv been simpler and yet more effective.Other than that a gr8 write.Thanks for entering

  • Mallig
    February 2, 2008

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    Wow, powerful! I don't think I've ever read a poem with such dark language that had such an uplifting message. Terrific form, flow and rhyme too. Excellent!

    . Rewarded 4


  • Perception
    February 2, 2008

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    Jim Morrison is one of my favorite singer/poet...

    I really like you poem. It is very dense, and your use of language is amazing. Every line held something different... Some new imagery... something different. I liked that.

    ~ Wonderful Write

  • georgie
    February 1, 2008

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    bound for jail this one held particular meaning to me and im writing it down in hope im allowed to read it when i go in. a brilliant piece,
    hugs,
    georgie,
    xxx

  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    February 1, 2008

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    Our mind does indeed toll the bell of inner turmoil most seductively. It shows here. A very nice piece
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