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Unseen Hands

Divinity claimed within earth's essence
faith held only with five senses.
Truth not truth merely because it cannot be seen
yet allegiance calls to core of the soul.
Conservation, sustainability for the here and now
so legacy can be left for future generations.
Yet the soul continues unnurtured for planet's sake
when all future will be determined on Judgement Day.
Nourish the soul with words of scripture,
as earth's posterity is held within unseen hands.


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  • penman gold member
    February 2, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • dustookie2
    February 2, 2008

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    There is a spirituality within these lines hun and truth of the ancient wise ones....Unseen Hands ...brilliant title great flow an inspiring take on the prompt. As I leave the lingering image going with me ... the unseen hands good luck in the contest.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 2, 2008

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    a powerful takeon the promt and i love the spirtiual touch you have penned within this.well done and gran and best of luck