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feeling colors

yellow
the color of the sun
as it dances on your skin
as your heart fills with pure joy
at everything you know or nothing at all

blue
the color of rain
as it plummets down to earth
in sheets of pain and suffering 
as you wish that things could be different

red
the color of your blood
as it rushes to greet your face
in pain or rage or love
as hands go where hands have never been before

colors are feelings you can see with your eyes
feelings are colors you can see with your heart and soul
they go hand in hand
like new lovers just starting there life together
like old lovers who have been through it all

A contest entry

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    June 2, 2008

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    Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • Emile
    February 3, 2008

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    Good

    This is very beautiful and flows like honey with a sweet after taste. Your words took stage and treated the reader to a glimpse of your imagination and poetic skills. A well structured poem.


  • raggyann
    February 2, 2008
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    now this is just a wonderful poem
    this contest will be a hard one to judge