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Flying Furry Fairies

Flying Furry Fairies

Far fetched for forlorn folly,
flying furry fairy flocks
found fast flight from
farmer’s father’s fancy.

Fighting for forgiveness from
farmer’s father's fancy,
flying furry fairies fell
far flitting from festering
fast food fixes.

Fathers found flying furry
fairies funny for fun, finding filthy
fanfare from festivities.

Finally forgiven, flying furry
fairies found forgiveness
flying for freedom
from farmer’s father's fancies.



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  • SwaGGtastic
    February 27
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    a thinker

    I like reading things like these keeps my mind going..


  • 2lullabyhaven
    February 5, 2008

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    Indeed, a tongue twister, twisted my mind also hahaha thanks for this intriguing entry into my contest Good luck to you


  • Desire gold member
    February 4, 2008

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    Wowzers!!

    Now that is one tongue~~~twister
    Love this one and the journey You took me on

    Woooooooooooo Hoooooooooooooo
    Amazing what the f word could bring forth
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Voice~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • moonbumps silver member
    February 3, 2008

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    Tried to say this quickly-absolutely hopeless!!!
    Great write and so very inventive.
    xxx


  • second-born
    February 2, 2008

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    Oh my...this is fantastically fabulous! Got my toungue twisted but my mind straightened up (not literally) because I've read another masterpiece from you...very captivating indeeed!


  • Faeryn
    February 2, 2008
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    I read it without messing up!


  • micol
    February 2, 2008

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    Great fun. A delightful twung tister...rats! I still can't cleak spearly...rats! Oh well...it was worth it.


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    February 2, 2008

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    Amera, this is wonderful, I have never read a tongue twister on here. I loved it, I stumbled lol, but thats probbly the whole point of a tongue twister
    I love fairys, as my last name is Fairey

    Well done and the best of luck in the contest you have it in


    Cindy


  • Luna Tique Fringe
    February 2, 2008
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    oh, what fun!!


  • HaleyMary
    February 2, 2008

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    Beautiful write, Sis. Wonderful imagery and it made me think of how some people may hope to be loved and forgiven in life, but that it can be hard to come by sometimes. I really liked how this is all written using one letter at the beginning of every word. What a great idea for a contest and you wrote this poem wonderfully. Best of luck in the contest.

  • Papagallo
    February 1, 2008
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    i always seem to be very low on applauses to give. But wanted to give you at least one.

  • Papagallo
    February 1, 2008

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    Tongue Twister Indeed

    This was a challange tp write I am sure. I got dizzy reading it. A beautiful flow. It took me a while to read for I also was laughing. You made my day here thanks. Now don't we all love those "fast food fixes" I do. Take care.


  • PerVirtuous
    February 1, 2008
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    Fairly f---- fantastic! Fine form. Flavorful flow. Fabulous finish.

  • Faeryn
    February 1, 2008

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    Oh, is this a challenge to say! (Exspecially because I'm chewing gum) I got through 3 lines before messing up. Great poem and tongue twister, Amera. I enjoyed reading it and attempting to say it without screwing up.
    -Tay

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