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Enter Eternity








Deafening silence
          Draped in a veil of sorrow

                  Defeated


                  Release....
         

A contest entry

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  • Luminescence
    March 14, 2008

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    This was great... nice and dark just how I like it...

    Thank you so much for entering and participating in my contest and good luck,
    ~luminescence


  • Stoneface Gremlin
    February 1, 2008

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    Short but, deep

    This is a poem that shows immense insight. Your wording efficiently sets the scene in the readers mind and the outcome. Very to-the-point.