Here
I cry in the night
For your touch
Begging for the morning light
This is too much
I long for your kisses
In the dark of night
When I've lost all of lifes blisses
I beg for morning light
I blast the music full blast
To get you off my mind
And to put this pain in the past
Where I will never find
I cry in the night
For your touch
Begging for the morning light
This is too much
I repeat your words in my head
Don't cry for me, live for me
How can I live when I wish I was dead
Your my reason for everything and everything I want to be
I would of drove the knife
Into me a long time ago
Without you in my life
I would of let it all go
I do live for you
As I lie here
The thought of you is stopping me from doing what my shattered heart wants me to do
I need you here
Author notes
Okay, this is a little aabout death, but I hope its not enough to be a bad idea to submit it.
In a list
A contest entry
- Make Me Sad by hey charlie.
470 points, ended February 20, 2008, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Good form and over all, nice write. Thanks for entering.
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A song of hope and love and a reason for staying alive.The repition and rhyme work beautifully here.Nice job.
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do live for you
As I lie here
The thought of you is stopping me from doing what my shattered heart wants me to do
I need you here
a great cry of the soul is here turned into the poetic form..a great write is here...
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