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Shining Darkness


While darkness reigns,
Truth shines,
Like a white bleached mask.

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 1, 2008

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    so beautifully written fromthe prompt expresses it with such imagery. well done and best of luck at judging


  • Nicotine Eyes
    February 1, 2008
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    This was nice. Very enjoyable. Also nice take on the prompt. Good luck!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    February 1, 2008

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    It's always great to know
    that the truth will always
    shine through no matter what.
    I love this piece, great work!
    Good luck to you with it!




    Jeremy0826


  • delightfulmess silver member
    February 1, 2008
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    Excellent!!!
    Brilliant take on the pic.
    Well done best of luck to you


    Delila


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    February 1, 2008

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    Wow this is sensational, well done on such a great write in so few words, goodluck in the contest

    Karen

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