I lay awake every night
thinkg of you
and realise
i could have had you
I tell myself
i am better off
with out you
but i cant
convince myself
of something thats not true
you said sorry
because of how you feel
but it doesnt change
how many tears i spill
Boy you are the only thing
that has been good in my life
i heard from your friends you
were going to take me as a wife
that all changed one night
when you blew
all our dreams
now all i can do
is
THINK OF YOU!
A contest entry
- vows,marriage,divorce,seperated..till death did you part..pw,s ok.. by Honeydew.
450 points, ended March 9, 2008, 22 entries
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Comments
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very nice
very nicely written....lots of rhyme and i like rhyme..good luck in and thank you for entering my contest. -
were going to take me as a wife
that all changed one night
when you blew
all our dreams
now all i can do
is
THINK OF YOU!
Ah..a tearful verse you wrote..I am sad as well..God bless you..
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Wow, I love this piece to bits! I can really relate to some of in a sense. I love the edginess, it's wonderful. I also like the background, but I've always liked this one. Great poem.
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Excelent!!! I adore this piece..Rather dark and a bit edgey but there's nohing wrong with that..You put this together very well GREAT JOB!!!
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