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Red Roses of Poetic tears

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The newspaper print, cold and black:

"Woman found dead in well."

 

Dark and dank a Georgia well sits.

Stained with the horrors of  wickedness and rage.

A “grave” for the woman in the well.

 

Found by her son at the tender age of thirteen, laying face down,

no more screams to be heard, dead.

Listed on her death certificate, Cause of death “uncertain.”

Buried with her that day?

A man’s injustice, and the Guilt of our Silence.

 

De-moralized questions taunt.

 How and What  was   “I” suppose to do?

“Everyone” knew, day after day the “bruises”

became ….normal.

 

“Injustice” does not speak softly but shrieks

With conviction melting even the boldest of hearts.

 

What would you do if the “sounds” of a woman getting beat?

Became justified excuses cautioning you?

 “it’s none of your business.”

 

Thirty one years later, a niece,

with courage of heart sought Answers and justice

for the murder of her Aunt.

 

The son of murdered Gwendolyn Moore,

a sweet boy, only thirteen years old at the time of her death.
Now a grown man weeps like a wounded babe for his ma.

 Veins of “regret” run thick and deep.

 Memories of her tears crying out each night, 

hearing her being beaten, punched and stomped.

Covered in bruises afraid if he hugged her?

It would crush what little... was left.

 

When asked why... his mama did  stay?

He chokes out the words, the threats of

Poverty his father made.

 Swallowed whole, believed and heard, our

Woman in the well barters food for her

Children in exchange for painful beatings.

A mother’s love for her children not wanting

To see them starve.

 

The courage of this niece we salute and

Admire. She demanded BOLD answers

Commanding the attention of Cold Case Investigators.

 

Exumed and removed from her weeping place

thirty three years later.

The woman in the well, Gwendolyn Moore

is clearly revealed.

A medical examiner tenderly speaks to her last remains,

the bones of her life.

“Speak to me, tell us what happened?”

 

Two hundred and six bones connect the body together. 

It was the bones of the neck first to speak to this doctor.

Crushed and broken, split in two, evidence of a powerful

“strangling.”

Murder charges were filed!

 

ON the Sixth day of July, Two Thousand and

Five, six weeks before trail?

The MURDERER of Gwendolyn Moore?

 Dies of cancer.

 

I write to honor her life.  The bold courage

Of her niece.

The voices of “injustice” speak harsh to my

Thoughts…

 What was the gravest injustice?

I bow my head in kindest respect,

SILENCE, it was the "SILENCE of ALL."

 

 

Red roses of poetic tears in kindest rememberance of

you dear poetic sister, Gwendolyn Moore. 

 


 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Dedicated to the courage and honor of A young mother, Gwendolyn Moore,In the State of Georgia who had no laws to Protect her and no courageous friends To stand up to this bully of a man.

The Murder of Gwendolyn Moore will not Be forgotten if we promise each other to stand strong
AGAINST THE EXCUSES OF SILENCE.

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  • DragonBlue gold member
    February 20, 2008

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    I find it difficult to find the words as to how this makes me feel. So many times I have interferred only to be let down and told it was none of my business. So many times, I was on the receiving end of the fist, and walked away only to walk into another relationship just like it. Silence, poverty, injustice and not a soul to rely on is what allows it to happen. We are beaten, raped and broken for the shear pleasure of our abuser to be able to do so. In most states, domestic violence is not even a crime, but a disturbance. And if you leave, you face extreme poverty, with others telling you what a failure you are for not making your marriage work at all costs. Silence like a cancer grows, and the longer you stay silent, the easier it becomes to stay so, and the more you die inside each time you stay silent when you should scream at the injustice. May her memory serve to help others who can yet walk away.

    Love & Light,
    )O(
    DragonBlue


  • maralisa silver member
    February 6, 2008
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    i admire your courage for your respect i love the line i bow my head in kindness respect a admirable write ful of deep emotions it is hard to stand up in life and be counted but only when we do we become so much stronger good luck with the contest my friend


  • fantasysmurf
    February 3, 2008

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    Speaking up for others

    Good write ears2hearyou. It is heartbreaking to think that this woman was alone in her journey. The murderer is one evil person. It sounds like he got an easy option on a way to die - too good. May she rest in peace. You have enlightened one more person to the story of Gwendolyn Moore; her abuse~and its tragic effects.


  • TizMoi
    February 3, 2008

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    Excellent Writing

    This is such a powerful piece, with such emotion. It really struck a nerve with me, and your right, its the silence, the silence of all, often in situations, its so easy to stay quiet than to stand up and be counted. Good luck in the contest.


  • natchstucco
    February 3, 2008

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    There are so many that fall silent here. Society turns it's ugly head and sees no evil . If one comes upon such brutality one should take action. easily said, but whom amongst us has the balls to do something. All that is needed is a phonecall.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 2, 2008

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    this is so perfectly expressed with raw and real emotions in your line. the story stunned me with such a powerful message. well done


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    February 2, 2008
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    awesome you always tell the perfect story and get your powerful messages across, bravo

    Tasha


  • seamaiden
    February 2, 2008

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    This just ripped my heart out of my chest. Any form of abuse is to me the most terrible thing that occurs in this world. We have so many laws and yet where are the laws to protect the battered and abused. It's not all physical. I do watch that show once in a while. I didn't see that one though. Thank you for sharing this with me and good luck in the contest. This is so sad and still your words for Gwendolyn. Keep writing poet. seamaiden ♥


  • Sinisterapple
    February 1, 2008

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    okay im swelling tears...reminds me of someone i had once truly loved. this is good, i feel stronger now.


  • stylization
    February 1, 2008
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    very good

    oh my god that's really good, really gets the sad story across- it makes you feel it.


  • Gods-Artgal
    February 1, 2008
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    This is a great and sad poem.
    I know how it feels to lose someone.


  • SilverButterfly gold member
    February 1, 2008

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    Excellent writing!!!

    This is the most touching story I read in quite a while. It is so disturbing to me why monsters want to hurt, just for the sake of control.

    This poor woman never got the chance to change her circumstances..he did that for her!

    WONDERFULLY PENNED STORY!!!

    Silverbutterfly


  • Truth-in-Chaos
    February 1, 2008

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    Speechless... No words to descibe the emotion in your words. I feel so much sadness, anger, and hurt. Silence is a deafness tone.

    Much Love


  • Clinging-to-Life
    February 1, 2008

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    wow...I dont even know what to say this is beautifully sad. is it true that it was your sister? ...beuatifully written!! ...this is so sad. i dont know what else to say it just blows me away.

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