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(Lesson) Blue-grey Eyes

An open door invites
me into the realm of your secret life. Stepping in
slowly, I
hesitate.

    Walking
          Slowly
              Through
                    The
                      Opening

I stop and stare, beautiful
images everywhere. I wonder
why you hide, behind your blue-grey eyes.

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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    February 13, 2008

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    Ummmm...

    So romantic! Now this is a surprise. I love the way you wrote the title. Love the "stairs" {?} The imagery is great. I can almost see this happening! Nice job you!
    Made me feel all warm & cuddly. Even though you removed my piece you meanie! :-)