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sitting here lost in thought

i sit alone in the window sill watching the snow fall
i stare up into the sky as it falls
i have the curtains pulled around me as i sit lost in thought
my thoughts are on you and me

i wonder where you are right now
the snow begins to fall harder as it get darker
yet i still sit there lost to my own thoughts
its was cold out and as i sat there i could feel the cold

so i slipped out of the window sill and grabbed a blanket
as i crawled back into the window seal the snow stopped
i could see down the street now and the sky
all the stars twinkled as if they were winking at me

i smiled and closed my eyes
i must have fell asleep there but i was still lost in thought
i felt myself being lifted and carried then someone laided me on our bed
i opened my eyes and you were standing there smiling down at me

i smiled back and then rolled over to go back to sleep
you crawled in next to me and pulled me close
i fell asleep my head on your chest
i was no longer cold but i was warm for you my love was holding me

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  • bananasfoster42
    February 1, 2008

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    this is really sweet. nice imagery. might i make one suggestion? i think "window seal" is spelled "window sill". otherwise, nice poem!