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Death to a Lie

From these eyes
I spin you lies
Whispered softly to butterflies

Grasping for truth
yet with fragile wings
they die

A contest entry

The gift of a heartbeating....given to that who loves the night.

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  • ixtli
    February 2, 2008
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    This is beautiful. It flows well. You say so much in such a short poem. Nice job!


  • Lavender Butterfly
    February 1, 2008

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    Great rhythm and flow and grasping content... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.

    • Inverted-Hearts
      February 1, 2008
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      And many thanks to you.
      For reading and finding such a picture of inspiration.


  • BellaD
    February 1, 2008

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    Love the ending. Very moving:
    yet with fragile wings
    they die
    Best of luck in the contest.

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