You think beating me will make me do what you say
You think making me feel like shit will solve your problems
Im not your doormat
Dont treat me like that!
All I do is try and love you and I end up with bruises
I can tell no one because they might not believe me
I keep thinking you'll change but what am I thinking
Everytime you hit me my heart keeps sinking
I fall face down in the dirt
And I say Im done but I seem to keep coming back
I use more makeup products in a week than most models do in a year
You beat me so bad I have to put foundation on my damn ear
How can this make you feel better about yourself
But what am I saying I tell you it doesnt hurt
So we seem to be both full of shit
What now should I duck from another hit
You didnt use to always be this way
Whyd the old you go away
I think maybe I should leave
Because Im tired of seeing all my blood on my sleeves
Author notes
I got face down by red jumpsuit apparatus
I think its pretty obvious though
so yeah hope you likey
good luck to you others
A contest entry
- music = life ♥ by CatastrophicSmile.
300 points, ended March 23, 2008, 18 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be honest?
Comments
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wow
i felt that pain as i was reading. And can't help thinking how people can bring you down.
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wow this gave me chills. it's sheer beauty. i loove it and love how you used it based around my fav. song. thank you sooo much
x finalist x
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i love this song!
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God i love that song! Great poem on the other hand, i liked the rhyme and the clear representation of pain. good luck in the contest
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