Even the stars will tremble in your wake,
Causing the world to crumble in your beauty.
The world will be at the mercy of your power,
And I will be forever at your side.
For as long as you want me, there I'll be,
Begging for your attention and love.
Even the stars will tremble in your wake,
And the seas will part for you alone.
The world melts away when you speak,
And I listen to every word you say to me.
For as long as I'm alive, I'll love you,
And follow you to the ends of the earth.
Even the stars will tremble in your wake,
And fall from the heavens into your eyes.
A contest entry
- (= Prewrites!!!!! ENTER NOW!!!!!!!!! =) by xCandieKissesx.
525 points, ended May 19, 2008, 79 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - -♥-~*Beautiful*~-♥- by xwarriorXprincessx.
900 points, ended August 18, 2008, 54 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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AWWWW! ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!
*HOLE IN THE SOUL* THIS IS BEAUTIFUL AND PERFECT! I LOVE THIS!
such excellent work.
oy... u nailed it with the last line too...
Even the stars will tremble in your wake,
And fall from the heavens into your eyes.
oh my... i can't even breathe. this is... breathtakingly amazing. excellent excellent excellent write.
my praises are a pebble in the bottomless pit of this poem's influential, touching, and lovely beauty.
I.
LOVE.
THIS.
best wishes and best of luck! -
Beautiful! I love the imagery and flow. This really struck me for some reason. I don't even know why. I've never had such a strong feeling like this before. Your poem is really compelling and powerful! Stellar! Thanks for the entry and good luck!
+ Jackie
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