The sound of the Spanish guitars blairs above the surface
of the underlining of two hearts beating
Your heart...my heart...the beating just won't stop
it's the sound of our love entwined with one another
Our precious naive untouched love
that screams of something more than just lust
It is those hazy mazey summer sunday nights
When we linger in between the just clean sheets
You in a dirty white T-shirt
And me in my washed out blue jeans
Nothing can be more perfect than this
No moment can ever be like this
When we run away to our multi-colored dreams
off to Forgien places with its holy unspoken languages
In Barcelona, on sandy beaches
with 18th century artistic pieces
Of you and me all alone
in Barcelona, con mi amor [Te amo mucho]
Makes me want to just be...free
Author notes
I was listening to the song Vienna by Matt Costa...from his newest CD
Very beautiful...everything love is about...perfect summer song..or spring!
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A contest entry
- Whats In your I-mind? by Irish Heart.
600 points, ended February 18, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I want a lot of poems... by love my jose luis.
900 points, ended February 21, 2008, 125 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Life Or Something Like It by shuvi.
300 points, ended March 20, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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So Beautiful, a really heartwarming peace. When you find someone like this, it is magic and you perfectly expressed that. Congrats on the gold =]
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DIFFERENT. Yeah!
much luck, shuvi -
I really liked this piece, I think I should listen to that song just because I like to know where different poems are inspired from. Sometimes it's really interesting. Thank you for your entry in my contest and good luck.
~Maria -
Great write!
This is so fasinatingly beautiful! The texture, the flow, the feeling, and quite frankly the vocabulary that you have placed into this poem just pour out. Great write
and good luck!
Sincerly,
Em -
This piece is very beautiful hahaha. much like the song lol. I loved the whole flow and I could picture everything in my head in brilliant colors. Amazing write, very impressed ;D
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