I'm addicted to pain and I can feel no love
I'm only worth the blaim and I never grow old
an 18-year-old teenager, that's what I am
always confused, always mistaken
The love you feel, I feel despair
when things go right I just can't stand
"I'm only happy when it rains"
can't have been writen for someone else
Emo is not my trend
I always want to be left outside
I can't seem to find my crowd
probably 'cause I don't really want to
and no I don't feel depressed
although that's how I want to
It feels so good to be alone
it just feels right when "nobody's home"
the love you feel is my despair
when nothing's wrong I just can't stand
Author notes
Song inspired
A contest entry
- I'm only happy when it rains by Naridill.
450 points, ended February 3, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful piece, very intriguing. The background is not plain, so you failed to follow rules. A beautiful piece none- the - less
But Thanks for entering,
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I'm sorry I didn't follow the rules.. I guess it kind of slips out of my control once I start to write and I've never been really good with rules afterall..
Thank you for reading my piece though..
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