Shakes an angry fist at the sky
screams to the heavens
with all the pain he feels inside
why must it end this way
the ground fills with blood
the air fills with cries
cries of ravens and crows
beaks rip and tear
at the undead flesh
more screams to add
to the mayhem
blood mud water
flesh bone fire
run scream hide
live pain die
can anyone live
why must everyone die
die with honor
honor in death
there is no honor
in the pain
your pain
my pain
the pain of the world
A contest entry
- Shakes an angry fist at the sky by Danna Hobart.
300 points, ended February 6, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - It's the end of the world as we know it by TrixieOne.
600 points, ended March 24, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very passionate and emotional. I love it

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My fav lines,blood mud water
flesh bone fire
run scream hide
live pain die
beautiful.
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Thanks for entering.



