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War

Shakes an angry fist at the sky
screams to the heavens
with all the pain he feels inside
why must it end this way 
the ground fills with blood 
the air fills with cries
cries of ravens and crows
beaks rip and tear
at the undead flesh
more screams to add
to the mayhem

blood mud water
flesh bone fire
run scream hide
live pain die

can anyone live
why must everyone die
die with honor
honor in death
there is no honor
in the pain

your pain
my pain
the pain of the world

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  • TrixieOne
    March 24, 2008
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    Very passionate and emotional. I love it


  • sableofnight
    February 10, 2008

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    My fav lines,blood mud water
    flesh bone fire
    run scream hide
    live pain die

    beautiful.


  • Danna Hobart
    February 6, 2008
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    Thanks for entering.