The secret garden,
behind the door,
the enchanted round door,
Underneath the entwined ever-growing ivy,
Deep, beaming green,
Beyond the thick wooden oak door,
Is a secret garden
An eden,
A paradise,
The flowing stream,
Rapid, clear blue water,
Glistens under the sunshine,
Green, green grass,
Sways gently with the wind,
Oh, how I wish,
I could go to a place like this.
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How I wish such a place existed! How beautiful, how peaceful this poem is!! Very nice!!!
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BEAUTIFUL!!!!!
As I read your lovely poem I am happy to see in my mind the story of the secret garden and what the people found there was much more than the beauty of nature but also of spirit and love.
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Quite Good
Some nice imagery does seem like a nice place to dream of, might be much more cohesive written in rhyme...George
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well done
Oh to find the door to the secret garden, you have penned a most delightful poem, great job, blessings John
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I want to go to a place like this too. It sounds so wonderful. A perfect paradise. Wonderful write.
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I can just see that garden with it's heavy oak door keeping out the intruders, keeping he grass sily and waving in the breeze, and the chrystal blue stream flowing through. What a place it must be.
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Enter at your own risk
into the land of starry eyed fantasy
for thouest may never knowest
the adventures that may bring
and the poems that may flowest
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Sounds like my kind of garden.
I do hope there are tomatoes there though. I do love tomatoes.
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This is a beautiful poem. Beautiful descriptive imagery.
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Excellent imagery. I found the entire thing to be a very beautiful picture in my head. And the ending added the sense of fantasy and imagination to it. The only thing I would question is the use of the word door. Three times may have been a little too many. Remember there are other similar terms such as "portal, gate, etc." This peace was fun to read.
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oh sis
this is such a great write the descriptions the imagery just rockssss
love you works dearkeep it up
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When you go, could you leave the door unlocked so I can join you? It sounds like a pleasant place to be.
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EVER SO BEAUTIFUL!!!
As I read I see in my mind that beautiful garden from the story Secret Garden.
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Oh I love this!!! Very well done...
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you have a vivid imagination and i love it! your work is so colorful and rich.
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this is rich with imagery and you let the reader come in to a fantastic world with you and see through your eyes. Nice job.
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thanks, it was inspired by the image on the Enchanted realm page
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mmmm
i wanna go too now, i realy like line 5 where it says beaming green cos that reminds me of a searchlight, that can't find the garden, but i think maybe "green, green grass" could have been made a slightly bit more interesting. on teh whole xxx je loves it and since u always complain that i dont comment or give you my preciaous applauses, for this great work have 3.
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I wish I could too. Reminds me of the book...called The Secret Garden. What do you know?
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this is beautiful and i closed my eyes just toimage the pretty scene. a beautiful and imaginative write
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