We dance upon the woodland green
moon beaming within sight
World aglow with moonlight's ray
showing a softer side of night
Round and round a melodic beat
aflame with music's trance
Echoes blossom beautifully
as we dance into romance
Swinging and swirling in circles
beneath the yearning moon
We're smiling hypnotically
making memories while we swoon
Author notes
Pas de Deux (Dance of Two)
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Photoart "Tangerine Moon" Photo credit to unintelligibill@Flicker foto
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A contest entry
- Writer's Choice by Peteskid.
1000 points, ended February 3, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pas de Deux (Dance of Two) Overnight Quickie by 2lullabyhaven.
455 points, ended May 9, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very nice and thanks for your entry
lol
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Oh, this is so lovely! sigh~....PK took the words out of my mouth when quoting me
...lol so all I can say is that this is breathtaking and such a wonderful use of language and imagery to make one melt...Just beautiful!
Lynda
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WOW... Nice.. I really like it... oh. i got new poems up.. like u asked..... :]
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this has such a beautiful, natural flow and wonderful imagery..a lovely moonlit dance..good luck in the contest..
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Thank you for this fine entry into the contest and best of luck to you in the judging...PK
This comment in the glowing style of Poet2Angels:
"Ohhh... simply stunning...so soft and lovely... the wonderful colors of a warm glowing moon such a romantic mood, dancing in moonlight... this is so beautiful[sigh]..."
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