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So Long the Sands of Time

Sometimes
          sandcastles
                        outlive their
                                      architects.

A contest entry

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  • Perception
    February 12, 2008
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    Wonderfully simplistic ~ yet so descriptive. I love what you did with such few words, it was so deep... So beautiful. I really like what you did with Sometimes/sandcastles it just flows so well with the same sound.
    Good luck in your contest


  • Darianna
    February 7, 2008

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    I'm not really sure what you are saying here...not sure how it relates to the prompt.

    Thankyou for entering my contest though,

    Dari xxx


  • luna-midnight gold member
    February 3, 2008

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    wonderful job!
    love the take on the prompt and such =)
    so simple and so beautiful
    good luck in the contest
    stephanei


  • stompsalot
    February 1, 2008

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    BEAUTIFUL IMAGERY

    Beautiful imagery! Love the way you lay it out there! I love sand castles and this is just gorgeous! This is truly Golden! Best wishes in the contest.
    many blessings and *stomps