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Thorn In My Side

Little petals fall from my rose
Each one standing for a way I feel about you
Eight small ways you disgust me
You ridiculous jokes that make no sense
Those kisses that make me gag
Your overused lies and made up tries
Tell me how I ever loved you
Your greasy hair your gangly walk
The way I am the one to blame
How our relationship put you to shame
Your less then a friend
More than a lie
It's funny how I fell for your disguise

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  • redhanded
    February 1, 2008
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    funny

    this poem has comedy and anger all in one i love it