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Passion's Despair

Nebulous creature
You've captured my heart
Forever forsaken
Love's embrace undiscovered
Never held captive
By adulation's despair
Meet me in the haze of daybreak
For passion will find you there

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  • Naridill gold member
    February 9, 2008

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    Beautifully penned - flowing and calm. Simple but directed beautifully from the image itself.

    Thanks for entering,


  • BleedingDeep
    February 1, 2008
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    Teriffic!!! Fantastic!! Not much words, but they have lots and lots of meaning....GOOD JOB!!!