Emerald eyes
Heart of glass
Kiss me please
That’s all I ask
Velvet fur
Twisted soul
Help me
Wake me up
I want to feel dreams
And so much more
Author notes
Its 30 words... and I couldn't make it the way i wanted so i compromised x]
A contest entry
- Heart Of Glass by Naridill.
525 points, ended February 9, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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'to feel dreams'
A mesmerizing phrase, very tainted and beautiful. Nicely penned response to image, captivating indeed.
Thanks for entering,

