Ella had no clue it would happen,
but what matters most,
is that it did.
She had no time left to go,
but somehow she got there.
And when she looked about her,
she had no idea of the number.
but there he stood,
right in the middle of the dance floor,
waiting for her.
and she floated towards him,
right into his arms,
and still she had no clue it would happen.
they danced and laughed,
and she fell in love,
and when he took her off to the side,
she thought it just an invitation,
an invitation to tell his undying love.
but little did she know,
that when they were alone,
he would pull her hands behind her back,
hold them there so she could not move,
and then before a scream could leave her mouth,
take that beautiful neck within his mouth,
and bite into it,
only to take her blood,
and to leave her fragile in a heap,
no idea what to do,
no idea where to go.
Little did Ella know that day,
she would become a monster,
and she was betrayed,
betrayed by a monster that she thought she loved.
and everytime she took the life of another,
just so she could live,
just because it was more than an addiction,
she thought of her prince,
and the monster inside her thrived.
Author notes
ummm... i tried my best... i'm not sure how i was suppose to do it, but i tried... and this is my twisted version of a fairy tale... even though i think vampires are totally sexy and would love to have a vampire boyfriend... that's just besides the point tho...
A contest entry
- Rapunzel by autarky.
750 points, ended February 20, 2008, 10 entries
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Comments
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Not sur about the title . .
I like the story with 2 emotions 2 plague the happiness of love at first and a change in mood to regret for herbetrayal. It's the emphasis. Goodluck in my contest. -
WEIRD
this is a very wierd write. but i guess i can expect that from you. so are still going to write the vampire story that you want to write?
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jethuth chritht!
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