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The most exquisite kiss

Slowly he moves in.

Her heart quickens

a beat!

The anticipation,

for it had been to

long since she had

sipped from a cup so

exquisitely sweet.

 

His touch

softer than a

feather against

skin so silken.

The desire building

up becomes

something she isn't

sure she can weather!

 

Those eyes!

Oh! The color of the

deepest most mysterious

place in the ocean!

So blue!

Drinking her in as if

starved for emotions no

one else could bear

so true!

 

The touch of his lips.

The taste of tongues

melding as one.

She swiftly feels her

defiance coming

undone!

 

The tingles melt

like fire upon ice!

All the way down.

Clearing paths to

her tippy-tippy

toes!

 

He pulls away as

slowly as he moved

in!

An expert at the

art of delectable

sin!

 

Every pore of her

being sparking to

fiery life as she

whispers softly,

" Again! Please,

again!"

Author notes

There is simply nothing that can compare to an exquisite kiss!

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  • darell
    March 27, 2008

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    Fantastic!

    The tingles melt like fire upon ice!
    All the way down. Clearing paths to
    her tippy-tippy toes!

    Bravo! I love that stanza. The entire
    poem was magical. Like love always is.
    The anticipation of something hoped for
    and dreamed of causes the juices to boil.
    The images were perfection.
    A great write filled with passion and romance.

  • piccola silver member
    February 4, 2008

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    this is sooo cute "The tingles melt like fire upon ice!
    All the way down.Clearing paths to her tippy-tippy toes!

    the tippy tippy toes is so sweet...The entire write is great. Lots of feeling in there and so discriptive too.
    You take the reader on a journey and let them see into this private world. Thank you for this entry.


  • creationsfromheart
    February 2, 2008
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    Awsome this is perfect and wow a perfect discription of that exsquisite kiss wonderful!!!!!


  • MidnightSunshine
    February 1, 2008

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    I loved it. You wrote it perfectly. I don't think a passionate kiss can be described any better than this.
    -sammee


  • Tarja
    February 1, 2008

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    Hot damn if you aren't correct! This was amazing! And so very true. I love what you said in your author's notes! There really is NOTHING like that kiss is there??

    • sapphireangelwings
      February 1, 2008
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      Indeed you are correct! It goes beyond merely the physical and reaches to the mental & emotional as well! I'm glad you agree!

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