8 sweet years
You and I
Our love, Our care
Is it all to waste?
You told me you loved me
You told me you didnt want me to change
Yet why do you shun me
Why has it changed?
So beautiful, so Young
Alot to offer
Beauty is inside
Not the looks we create
Words spoken from your lips
How your different
How you understand
No pressure from you
But now you want what I can't give
I'm unsure whether to or not
STOP pressing me to make the decision
I can't here and now
Oh is that not good enough
Then fine, fuck you
Walk away
See if I care
Cuz you ARE like other guys
You ARE just a pig
There are woman out there who want guys like you
Leave me alone till you do understand
This is something only my true love will
Your just a pig
Driven by hormones
The times you held me
The times you kissed me
They just make me think
Just HOW you DISGUST me
Stop giving me bullshit lies
Stop thinking of what you want
I thought you loved me
But now you just disgust me
Author notes
This is true, he does disgust me with what he does but maybe im foolish to still love him and to hope he doesnt throw our relationship away
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- You Disgust Me. by Abby In Chains..
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I really enjoyed this....it feels so real....
the author notes confirm the authenticity that shows in the lines regardless.
I am left a bit confused, not by the write but the authors notes...8 years or not, if he disgusts you why hope he doesnt throw you away?? Dont even give him the chance, throw his ass out first. If after 8 years thats what you get, then its even more of a reason to let go.
angry and raw. Thanks for the entry.
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hmm it didnt make sense but i changed it so others who want to raed why can.. and maybe im foolish but 8 years of history sometimes overrides the distgust which at times disgust me more...
I did write this from my heart at that moment and time.. how i get my emotions out
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nice
it um, good.
yeah... me have no brain.
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Some guys are led around by their pointer, looking to explore every nook and cranny, every crevice available, and they expect to be able to spelunk with the ones who care about them, but not yet deeply enough to allow them to go deeper.
Most of the time they are seeking temporary housing, and are unappreciative of the surroundings until you evict them, or until what they think is a better place to snuggle in comes along. LOL~~~Hope it works out for you~~Artis
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I agree with below, 8 years is a long time to just throw away here's hoping he sees what a gem he's got
Very well penned hunni.
Mum xx
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hmm. on one hand i love the anger in this piece, i really hope he doesn't throw your relationship away.
(i would suggest spell check, please dont think i am a bitch)
sadly most guys are this way, eight years is a lot for him to ruin. i truly hope that he comes around, and isn't just a pig.
best of luck with it, and thank you for entering.
Abby
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