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Harmony - Steady Beat

Breathe in; breathe out
those sweet whispered sounds that sting your tongue
this close I can feel the heat, a match struck in your heart
Voglio vederti stasera
(I want to see you tonight…)
touch you, taste you
Fingertips memorize every curve
texture of your perfect skin
savor the aroma, the heat of your body
pressed close against mine –

Breathe in; breathe out
breathe faster, listen – let go
need, desire all in good time
Tongue twisting in energy, pressed against my teeth
How could you not breathe fire
into me, hold on to me, let the flames consume me.
I want to burn.

Promise me your heart beats
– in perfect harmony and again my soul sings to you
screams for you, cannot let you go
To have and to hold, stop me should I sound so bold
take my hand lead me into darkness where bodies are enflamed.
(Touch me in ways that would make your mother blush)
A slow steady rush to combine,
define – one another as equals
Bend, arch, spill over to animals
Kiss me, let your body do the talking this time
Show me. How. You. Feel.

Open my fears and drown them in you
all the memories that hunt me down
I want to drown. in. your. ecstasy.
Tear me, Rip me from physical until I seep into you.
Let me pulse in your hands.

Bathe in the water. Pull me down, pull me under you
(Oh Father, Forgive me for I have sinned…)
take in the water, purify my body
(Touch of hands, Let me know Sin.)
Fill me, cleanse my wounds, make it bleed
(This is my body, This is my blood…)
wave of crashing water, swallow me, swallow me whole.

Breathe in; breathe out, harmony in the breath of two
ragged breath, sweet death
of the fear, now in your powerful arms…
to touch quivering lips, that whisper in the night
to taste skin of silk, illuminated in twilight
lose control in the pounding of two heartbeats,
Loosen the strings that bind and in rapture passion find,
two halves make a whole – two heartbeats, one soul.


Author notes

The Sequel! Hurray!

Wow, we are off again with this second piece, thoughts sending us off in hopes of a third, exciting and the more we write, the more we feel. It is impossible to stop the intensity of heart beats when spilling out emotions, working back and forth, trying to get the perfect word and find that there is none.

To Damian - this was SO MUCH FUN. I cannot wait to work on the third, but my sudden writer's block (well hatred for what I put to paper) has me suddenly concerned but hopefully you can inspire me to put some thing down that can reverberate back to you and combine our words to make something beautiful. Thank you for working with me!

Look for the third! And enjoy!

Love,
Katrina

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  • Lucifers Seductress
    February 2, 2008

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    Never - read these back to back like me. It was a bad idea because I'm crying again and it's EXHAUSTING! This time around I could pick out a few things that I knew almost for sure who wrote what. To be honest - I have never felt so FULL OF LOVE just reading something written and it's a WONDERFUL feeling. I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT PIECE! Because you two have really captured something here and I want to see where it goes. Tell Stephen to keep walking!!!

    I LOVE YOU BOTH SO MUCH, SIMPLY AMAZING WORK!!

    Still in love with you both,
    Alex


  • il guardiano
    February 2, 2008

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    Katrina, when we finish the third piece perhaps you could stagger the lines that I write or that you write, that way Amy can tell which lines belong to who. It was a pleasure working with you, a much needed stress reliever for you and I am glad I could be of some help. You are a wonderful write to collaborate with and I do look forward to beginning the third piece once you have overcome your "annoyance" at the words you write. Believe me when I say your words are nothing short of perfection.


  • Porcelain Doll
    February 1, 2008

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    ...Wow. I cannot even tell where your words end and his begin. Beautifully woven together, and... wow. So much emotion and passion. I do believe I am awake now. I hope you get over the writer's block soon- I an anxious to read more.
    ~amy


    • tinydarkgoddess
      February 1, 2008
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      Thanks. I hope I get over it too. I can tell where I begin and he starts but I guess that's because I know exactly what words came out of my head. Most of the lines that are a little more heated and to the point sexually, are mine that is more for effect than anything, We are wanting the pieces to build on one another, making it a struggle until it breaks, and lose control. I am glad you enjoyed it.

      Love you
      ~ Katrina