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Married

We are one,
My better fourth
Joined at last
By the ever-lasting circle

Our hearts beat together
Just like that night
You pointed out that my heart
Was leaping out of my chest

But yours was too
For the same reason
And then we connected
With mouths but no words for the first time

My better fourth
Only because everybody else says half
There actually is no division
We are one


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  • LadyPyriel
    May 12, 2008

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    good

    i dont think you portrayed your emotioton as well as you have before, but its still a really good write to hear you talk like this is impressive. congradulations... im happy for you.