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Bronze - Senryu two poems - BGMA Holihock Kaleidoscope

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my first attempt at this

Bronze - Senryu two poems - BGMA Holihock Kaleidoscope
toilet paper rolls Kaleidoscope
only lasts for a short while
with children around


a bulky dresser
is humongous to a kid
but shrinks as we grow

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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    November 27, 2008

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    Kaleidoscopic!

    Love the background & for a first attempt to pen this & win a Bronze....!!! These are surely birthed from an experienced Mom & her children!