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beguile

shallow dress
pink appeal
show your soul
has no meaning

disintegrate soon
lose all beauty
show superficiality
yet delicate . .

all is nothing
soon to die
wings of hope
cannot survive

Author notes

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butterfly soul
style: Free verse

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  • penman gold member
    February 11, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 1, 2008

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    Creatively deep and immensely profound... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.