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[ The man falls over ]

The man falls over
No other man breaks his stride
cruelty or lifelike?

A contest entry

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  • Quill Bill
    July 10, 2008
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    life can be crue, and some fall by way side,


  • Poetess12
    February 3, 2008
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    I like this one. You did a great job on your Senryu. Thanks for your entry in my contest.