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hearts aglow

  beauty fills a void 


it calls our soul

just like two

candlelit lovers

of shining glass

Author notes

prompt: beauty
photo:
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2388/859.jpg?1202180887
left align: beauty in simple things

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  • genevieve3
    February 13, 2008
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    aww short sweet and poigonient

  • Gott ist tot
    February 9, 2008
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    Lovely simile This was nice and hopeful. Good luck.
    Thanks for your comments


  • DeadlyPoetic88
    February 8, 2008

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    This piece sounds pretty.. although I think the images your trying to make us see are a little confusing. I like it though. Its leaving me trying to figure out what you are trying to say.

    dani

    • carole21
      February 8, 2008
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      thanks

      check the photo prompt .. it is just a comparison like hearts aflame . . the glass is shiny and pretty and has beauty like love . . the soul is only deeper . . appreciate your critique . .


  • Cat gold member
    February 1, 2008
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    candlit lovers of shining glass? I'm not sure i completely understand this piece-
    although it sounds really pretty.. im not completely sure if it is just picture inspired or if I am somehow missing a deeper metaphor..

    it is lovely to read though..

    m

    • carole21
      February 4, 2008
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      thanks

      the two are close and aflame just like two lovers . . the simple beauty just reminded me of that and a deeper soul feeling . . plus they are close

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