I'm sorry mom, that my letter made you cry ;
Please don't be sad even though this are probably the last words i'll ever write.
But, Don't ask why
because it's better for me to die.
Sometimes everything comes togheter and there's no'one to talk to.
you're trying everything to get out of that black hole,
pills, cuts and cries are made but the pain isn't willing to fade.
it's like you don't need me anymore..
maybe you don't see, you don't see i care about you.
but i DO ! , i really do..
and maybe you don't see, you don't see it's killing me.
Just know i bleed for you from whole my heart!
Dad this one is for you;
you made me cry, but i don't care, i don't care about you!
Hurt me, break me down but never ever break my mothers heart
The words and critics once said are like an arrow through my heart.
I can forgive but i can't forget.
Words once said are a scar for eternity.
For this last letter is slowly burning up, i'll just blame myself like always.
As i take the knife and my blood starts to drip
i'll write my last words on the wall with the bits of blood that are left
'someone you love the most will leave the biggest scar in your heart,
a pain that will never go away, a pain you can't run away from..'
.. i don't know
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powerful...most at the end...i loved the description in the end....and the quote as well
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powerful emotion..
every word in the piece is beautiful..
i love it!
keeps getting better everytime
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I can feel the agony in this poem. The feeling and depth in it. I understand this poem a whole lot. It reminds me of me a bit, sadly I know. It made me feel... not alone. Keep up the great job.
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wow! the agony in this poem is immesurable! it's just so raw and just.. oh i dun know how to explain it! it just hurts... Emotions were true, and very strong and powerful! Keep the faith alive!
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You are a very good writer. I love your pieces! These poems relate to me more than you would think, and I find this one bloody fantastic! Props!
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wow
i felt all the pain in this poem and i lived it!!!
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great emotion
This is a great write. I like it very much. You did an amazing job at writing this poem, and i really like how I can connect to your poem Great JOB! -
i love this one.
the part im sorry mom, that my 1st letter made you cry reminds me of a really good song you should listen.i dnt care about mahh dad either, nor do he care about me
but good job
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Wow
this was really good I kinda wrote my mother A letter like that but I never gave it to her. This piece made me think. You put a lot of emotion into it very well done. The emotion that you put in this piece was very strong you let everything come out. your a really good writer. Great job.
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i love it
this is one of the best that ive read
especially this part:I can forgive but i can't forget.
Words once said are a scar for eternity
very nice job
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LOVE IT
love it good rite just if this is a letter dont die i wont have enyone on this site
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i'll write my last words on the wall with the bits of blood that are left
'someone you love the most will leave the biggest scar in your heart,
a pain that will never go away, a pain you can't run away from..'
best lines of the entire thing. wow you ended this perfectly.
but don't die, hahah i need you to be here to talk to me!!
your writing is much better already, and you're really warming up to the poetry scene. this is so sad, and it made me nearly cry. but i like the emtion built up inside this.
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Awh...
Don't die...
I'd be sad...even though I don't really know you...
But I like you....
You seem nice and I want to get to know you!
So don't die! Just yet!
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