Wheezy Whoozle could not choozle
which star to wish upon.
So Wheezy Whoozle asked Momma Whoozle
how to choozle the perfect one.
My dear Wheezy cant you seezy
that the choice is yours to make.
You see Wheezy its real easy,
the stars are yours to take.
But Momma Whoozle how can I choozle?
They are all so far away!
Momma Whoozle help me choozle!
Before they all go away.
Momma Whoozle and Wheezy Whoozle
stayed up until the day.
But Wheezy Whoozle could not choozle,
and the stars all went away.
Wheezy Whoozle went to schoolzle,
and to his teacher he did say.
Miss Whoozle how can I choozle?
The stars, they all went away!
Oh dear Wheezy, cant you seezy
they have not all gone away.
Look dear Wheezy and you will seezy,
one shines throughout the day.
This was not easy for poor Wheezy,
It confused his whoozle mind.
For poor Wheezy could not seezy,
a star in the sky that shined.
As Wheezy Whoozle walked home from schoolzle
it dawned on Wheezys mind,
I do seezy its real easy!
I see the star that shines!
Wheezy Whoozle could now choozle
just the perfect one,
Wheezy Whoozle did so choozle
to wish upon the Sun.
Author notes
A contest entry
- Rhyme and Flow part 2 Children's - 50,000 points series by cricketjeff.
4000 points, ended June 3, 2008, 39 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Cute piece, really fun humorous read. Congrats on the honorable mention on this piece, it had to be really good to place in such a big contest.
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I adore this sort of wordplay and this is a delight, I really wish there were more top prizes available but a superb HM!
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Love the crazy wording used in this piece Great for kids and silly folk like me, An enjoyable read Good luck in the contest
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This is superbly cute! Great job!
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Such a fun poem. Loved your use of..."cat in the hat" kind of words.
Congrats on the honorable -
Catchy rhymes that are bound to be repeated over and over again by this young lad as I am sure this will bring many smiles and comfort to him. A wonderful job on this! Blessings and best wishes,
Frogz~
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First of all i would like to thank you for entering my contest. Just by doing so you are giving hope to everyone that this has affected. I really like this poem. Your word choice and the way you morphed certain word to rhyme and used words that did rhyme was very entertaining. It's a great kids poem. Thanks again for your entry and good luck in the contest.
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Very cute
thanks for sharing this with the group.
Ephiphany♥
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Awww, what a cute little diddy!!!
Loved the creative use of a
"Wheezy Woozle" though it was a bit of
a tongue-tied twister. Have you
ever written limericks before? He
might enjoy those as well.
Thanks for sharing with us
and keep on penning!
~The Inc."
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wow ... this was almost a tongue twister for me ... lol
what a great childrens poem, my little ones will love this!
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I loved the imagination, the word choices and the fact that it was just plain fun to read! Will have to share this with my Grandkids.....
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well now this was really cute i did enjoy it very much, i think that any kids would love this poem of your. I hope that you will have a grand day
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yeah, your own vocabulary really adds to the effect of this poem. really enjoyable and well done!
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Cute, I will read this to Kiera when she wakes up. It's very creative and fun. Thanks for sharing.
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