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An Affair To Remember...

It happened for the very first time,
That cold and wintery evening and all alone,
A night of communication I'll always regret,
It was then we connected and began the bond.

Only a couple of months later we kissed,
You were that drug to me so addictive,
The cold and thrilling sweats,
And all that passion all in one moment.

I fell so far for you but into Satan's pit,
Not understanding me at first and not caring,
Span round on the wheel of fortune,
And finally shone down on me with hope.

But all was turned over like the tails on a coin,
You had hidden your secret until I found out,

Not knowing you were married already,
That cut my heart into tatters and ruins.

I know what is right and what is wrong,
And I've cried for an endless eternity,
Not wanting to admit that you knew all the time,
What you were doing to me and her and them.

 

I'll never forget the good,

But I'll never forget the bad,

I hoped you cared enough not to hurt me,

I was obviously wrong about you...

 

What can I do now there's nothing left to do?
You took my dreams and you were my desire,
That can no longer be anymore,
This heartache so strong and unbreakable...

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  • xXGoddessofPainXx
    October 10, 2008
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    This is a pretty good write.. Thanx for entering


  • eronrox
    March 15, 2008
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    awww. this is sad. and fits right into the contest. it's good and i get it.


  • alaskanamber
    February 14, 2008

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    Heartache is one of the strongest feelings in the world. I've learned the hard way that the pain slowly fades but that person will always be in your dreams. Your memories may slowly fade but your heart will always remember. A couple of critiques on this one. Pay attention to the tenses in the poem. And sometimes less words are more. Thanks for entering and good luck.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    February 1, 2008

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    oh boy

    another sad sad piece, i'm batting a thousand today, with the reads. sadness seems to be in abundance today.
    good job of putting down your feelings though! lots of luck in the contest.


    • Passionate Phoenix
      February 1, 2008
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      thank you, just a few negative feelings I felt I should let out for my own personal health I must admit, I've read a lot of sad pieces today... xx

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