Naturalism (characteristic
of terrorism and pacifism)
indoctrinates in state activation!
Specifically, conditioned results
distorting, (as otolithic membrane
gelatinously exudes) unbalanced
petrification through strychninism!
(Painted Facts Bond Like Glue To Seal The Truth!)
Author notes
A Vandal's Decision On The Artists Impression/Portraits Of A Criminal Mind
Banged To Rights In 80 Words, The Headline Holds To Equalize!
A contest entry
- Word Smiths by plainoljoe.
1900 points, ended February 10, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrites Mania by Celticmoon.
450 points, ended March 30, 2008, 84 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Dear Word Smith, return read sent me back to revisit and what more may I add, your words speak as loudly today as they will tomorrow!
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While this sparks massive excrusions of abstract, I felt as though some of the words was a bit 'forced out' while at the same time, the message you're delivering is well played out. -
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thanks!
it was originally written to be 'academic', so I had a bit of fun with pretentious wording
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i keep drifting on that with criminal mind - are we not all like that. as you start your poem here, natural ways, we live and run
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subliminally criminal
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well,you got me on this one,its deep and makes the mind wonder,till it hits you in the face!wow well done here!
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say that ten times fast, I'd like to see any well-rounded verbalist try. The video you sent was odd
to say the least, but gave me a chuckle. I'll say this, you said more than seven speeches ever could there, but like the commenter before me said, it's a shame none of the cracked-up goat-fucking mules will ever understand or even listen to anyone with an ounce of intelligence, let alone common sense.
as always i salute you for your dare to be unusually amazing attitude.
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Bush would not understand. Too high-minded vocabulary for our illustrious president to pronounce. I would not recommend a job for you as his speech writer
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Way to go! The poetess is at the podium on the page, she doesn't use words with three or more syllyables to pontificate, she makes a balanced meal with her own no-holds-barred societal statement poetically.She allows The Word to swell, not with pomp but with circumstance. The delivery is breathless,passionate,she is not insubordinate, she simply says what she means and the reader is left with no doubt that she means what she says.
After the rush of consciousness there is a pause, a hush, a summary within a soundbite in sotto voce but still ingrained with stoicism " painted facts act like glue to bond the truth "
The poetess took to the stage and delivered this faster than Alexi Sale on speed and with much more aplomb. She frees thoughts via free speech and shows how we are both imprisoned and free to avoid the liberty that others take with there free speech.
She leaves the reader veritably and virtually exhausted and yet, yet replete.
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Matt, this is above excellent. hats off and my heartfelt applause
Joe
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petrification named strychninism!
I was just thinking about poison for the rats
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