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i still miss you

oh brother of mine

you've been gone a long time

how much longer til i see you again

 

i think of you often

both happy and sad times

are embroided in my brain

 

i will miss you today

as much as yesterday

for you're always here

 

i miss your smile,

your face and heart

even your ears i miss to see

 

our fights were grand

but you're a brother of mine

i will miss you this day

 

as everyday becomes even harder

sometimes i forget

you are gone, never to return

 

that i must remember well

but brother of mine i miss you so

can't wait to see your face again

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  • pappacass
    February 1, 2008
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    i feel you

    this was really good.......losing a brother myself i can relate...thanks for entering