Your heart…
created for me to protect…
your eyes,
for me to get lost in.
Your strong arms…
chiseled simply to
keep me feeling safe and warm.
God made you
perfect…
for me to love…
then he screwed up
on geography.
Please tell me what you think
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This was great, you show the feeling of true love. I never would've guessed it was about a long distance until I got to the end. But the beginning of the poem shows that if love is true it can overcome any obstacle that may come in the way. The title already gives the reader a sense that it's about love. The first line continues with that topic and the last line is perfect like I stated earlier in the review. Great write.
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good write Emily, loved the twist at the end. Keep writing and thanks for sharing your poetry
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dang, i take it there is someone out there you have gotten attached to, that is cool, i like this poem, keep it flowing
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That was too funny, honey! Excellent twist at the end. (I actually stopped commenting to read it again) It was delightfully romantic, and dreamy! Fabulous job!
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